Rose Memory

 Experimental fourth-grade Wenshan Zong Bao

(original)

open the memory window, the most memorable in my heart the flower, not a daffodil, not a calla lily, but also not a piranha, but the roses.

flowers red roses, it redrying garden plants, from a distance, like a red apple,UGG shoes, I get a rose back support, the family becomes fragrant, all at home the smell of roses, so I like roses, a few days, Rose died, I get roses, garden roses have been I get done, then no rose garden, and has been I took over

a rose, you are my friend brought me joy, so I will never break up with you, do not I will forget you? Memory rose

Zong Bao

(Revised)

open the memory window, the most memorable in my heart the flower, not a daffodil, not a calla lily,cheap UGG boots, not a piranha, but the roses.

flowers red roses, it redrying garden plants,UGG boots cheap, from a distance, like a red apple. Abstract rose back support, and family all the smell of roses. I like roses. A few days later rose to wither. I went to pick the garden roses,UGGs, garden roses have been my pick over, then no roses in the garden.

a rose, you are my friend brought me joy, I will forget you do it?

reviews: writing around the center of these treasures, there are some writing ideas. But the article is too simple, does not describe the specific levels of detail, shall not be treated. If the appearance that the roses a vivid description of the specific good that will follow, in the future the process of writing, attention to careful observation will provide a physical basis for writing. Refueling.